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Once upon a time their was a boy named Christian. He was a nice young boy who treated everyone nicely but he was abused and treated horribly at home. He is sweet on the outside but on the inside he is dying and feels super lonely. He wants to end his life because he feels like theirs no point to it. One day he starts to hangout with the wrong people. He started doing drugs and getting into fights. A few months later he finds out that some are fake and they all turn on him. He ended up being beat up and bullied for a long time. Christian didn't tell anyone because of what happened, he thought everyone was fake and no one would look out for him. One day Christian stood up for himself and knocked one of the bullies down but the numbers game beat him and he got beat again and again. He ended up getting tired of his bullies so one day he goes to school and jumps each one when they are by themselves and he gets suspended. That same night Christian out a bullet threw his head after he wr...

LITETATURE ANALYSIS

                 The plot of Mice and Men is working to get enough money to buy a house with some land and no longer have to move around. The theme teaches a lesson of human existance. Most of the characters admit at one timeor another, to have profound a feeling of loneliness and isolation. All the characters have had a bad past and want to have a great future but it never will happen. To me the character that sounds the lonelinest is Candy the old man because he only has a dog left and later on the dog gets shot.           By the authors tone i think he wokes up early and goes to sleep late. He sounds like this because to write a book with spelling this complicated it must take a long time. For the author to stay up late he must have drank alot of caffine. He needed it to be up and have alot of energy. His excercise must have been yoga and going out for jogs to stay in shape and healthy. After a long day of writin...

My Big Question

Where do we all come from? What created space? I hear people talk about how we came from apes/monkeys why are their still monkeys or apes? If we some how evolved from apes/monkeys why don't we have treats like them. Why wouldn't our noses be in our body's not facing out? If a Big Bang created earth what created the Big Bang? What created the other planets outside of earth? What created space or was space allways their? What is space?

The Week In Review

I learned about theme and plot. I learned what a good story makes up of. I also learned what some new words mean. We reviewed a story plot witches helped me understand things more. It helped me with the stories in the test we took.

The Plot Thickens

Do you like action? Then you'll love stories that are driven by plot. Here are the key ingredients to a good plot. The first ingredient is the expostion. The expostion is he bigging of the story were you start tolearn a little bit about the story. The second ingredient is the rising action. The rising action is were you find out more about the story and it gets very interesting. it also is the point were it starts having more of a bang to the story. The third part is the climax. The climax is the part were you reach the very peak of the action and it is so interesting that you cant stop readig or watching. The last but not least is the resolution. This is the end of the story were you comprehend every thing and understand the story. these are my ingredients fora good plot.

THE MAKING OF AN ESSAY

The thoughts going threw my head when i was writing my essay were what am I going to write about? Will I get a passing grade? What is Dr Preston looking for? Does the size of the paragraph matter? After that all I did was just type and see what happens. I let my thoughts control my essay. I stopped thinking about what i am going to write about and just use my resources to make a good essay. I also hate when a teacher gives us crappy feed back that doesn't help us after we get our essays back.

My impresstion

What i would like to do in my future is join the Marine corps. After that retire and become a police officer. I would like to travel to Hawaii and just explore go out camping and have fun. For me all I want in my life is happiness and no sad days even though there will be sad days no matter what I do to stop it.